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Chapter 3 - The Ghost in the Registry

By sunrise the next morning, my hospital room had been transformed into a temporary war room.

Rosa, my night-shift nurse, had quietly smuggled in a fresh cup of black coffee and blocked the doorway with a rolling supply cart to keep my mother, Linda, from storming in with a tray of guilt-trip casseroles.

"Your lawyer is downstairs in the lobby," Rosa whispered, handing me a secure tablet. "He brought a stack of court filings thicker than a medical textbook."

I sat up slowly, gritting my teeth as the titanium rods in my spine reminded me of their presence. "Send him up."

Dan Mercer walked in wearing a tailored charcoal suit, looking like a man who hadn't slept in twenty-four hours. He carried a leather briefcase that smelled of fresh paper and expensive leather. Behind him stood a young paralegal holding a portable scanner.

"Good morning, Maddie," Dan said, pulling up a chair beside the bed. "How's the back?"

"Like someone replaced my spine with a hot fireplace poker," I managed a tight smile. "Did you pull the registry files?"

Dan opened his briefcase and laid out three crisp, printed documents across my bed tray. "Your father didn't just forge a medical power of attorney. He used a blank template downloaded from a cheap legal website, forged your signature, and had a shady mobile notary friend of his—a guy named Gary Vance—stamp it without verifying your identity while you were under general anesthesia."

"Gary Vance?" I frowned. "Is he related to Harrison Vance, the cash buyer?"

"Father and son," Dan replied grimly. "Harrison Vance is a notorious real estate flipper who specializes in distressed properties and title laundering. They structured this transaction as a cash-out distress sale at forty percent below market value—paying $250,00xi for a condo worth $425,000, with the remaining $175,000 mysteriously funneled into a private shell company owned by Brianna’s fiancé, Tyler."

My jaw tightened. It wasn't just a wedding vanity project. It was a calculated embezzlement scheme using my unconscious body as the getaway vehicle.

"Can we freeze the escrow?" I asked.

"We can do better than that," Dan said, a sharp, predatory grin spreading across his face. "Under Colorado property law, a fraudulent conveyance executed while the primary owner is incapacitated is legally void ab initio—meaning it never legally happened. Furthermore, because Harrison Vance knowingly participated in a fraudulent title transfer without the owner's biometric or in-person verification, he's an accessory to grand theft."

Dan tapped the top document.

"I've already filed an emergency lis pendens on the property title, slapping an immediate federal freeze on the condo and all associated escrow accounts. The wedding planner’s check from the escrow account is going to bounce by noon today. And by tomorrow morning, the county sheriff is going to serve Harrison Vance with a warrant for property fraud."

I looked down at the paperwork. The fiery pain in my back seemed to recede, replaced by a cold, steady rush of pure empowerment.

"What about my family?" I asked.

"Your father and sister?" Dan’s smile widened. "They're currently sitting at the country club finalizing seating charts, completely unaware that their $120,000 venue deposit just bounced, and their cash buyer is about to lose his dealer's license."

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I picked up my phone, dialed my mother's number, and put it on speaker.

"Let's check in on them," I whispered.

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