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Chapter 6 - The Unraveling of Walls

The weeks that followed were not an instant fairy tale. Grief does not vanish because someone reorganizes the kitchen or because a billionaire cancels a morning meeting. There were relapses—days when Julia woke up screaming, days when Laura pulled out clumps of hair until her hands shook, and days when Mariana locked herself in her room and refused to come out for dinner.

But the difference was that now, when the storms hit, no one ran away.

Ricardo kept his promise. Every evening at 6:55 p.m., his black sedan pulled through the iron gates. He walked through the front door without his briefcase, sat at the dinner table, and listened—truly listened—to the chaotic, overlapping chatter of his six daughters. He learned about Beatriz and Bianca’s latest science projects, listened to Sofía’s endless stories about her preschool drawings, and sat patiently in silence beside Julia when her panic threatened to choke her.

Luía proved to be a force of nature. She didn't coddle the girls, nor did she tolerate their rebellion. She set firm, unyielding boundaries wrapped in fierce, uncompromising affection. Under her guidance, Laura’s hair slowly began to grow back as her hands found comfort in pottery and woodworking rather than self-destruction. The twins channeled their chaotic energy into competitive sports and art classes rather than household sabotage.

And Mariana—proud, sharp-tongued Mariana—slowly, reluctantly melted.

One evening six weeks into Luía’s tenure, Ricardo found Mariana sitting on the kitchen counter after dinner, helping Luía chop vegetables for the next day’s meal.

“You know,” Mariana muttered, staring down at the cutting board as she sliced a carrot with surprising precision, “you’re still bossy.”

“Bossy gets things done,” Luía replied smoothly, flipping a pan on the stove. “Complaining keeps you sitting in a dirty kitchen.”

“Do you… do you ever miss Capão Redondo?” Mariana asked softly, the hostility entirely gone from her voice, replaced by a quiet, vulnerable curiosity.

Luía paused, lowering the spatula. She looked out the window toward the glittering lights of São Paulo sprawling across the horizon. “Sometimes. My parents are there. My neighborhood is loud, messy, and full of life. But people there don't have the luxury of drowning in their own misery, Mariana. When you’re busy trying to survive, you learn that grief isn't a tombstone. It’s just heavy baggage you have to figure out how to carry without dropping.”

Mariana absorbed the words in silence. She reached out, tentatively touching Luía’s sleeve. “Do you think… do you think Mom would hate us for laughing again?”

Before Luía could answer, Ricardo stepped into the kitchen, his footsteps soft against the tiles. He walked over, wrapping both arms around Mariana and pulling her tightly against his chest, burying his face in her dark hair.

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“Your mother would have loved every single second of this, Miri,” Ricardo whispered, his voice thick with emotion. “She loved you too much to ever want you to live in a mausoleum.”

Mariana pressed her face into her father’s shoulder, a single tear slipping down her cheek—not of pain, but of release.

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