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Chapter 5 - Descent into the Salon

Downstairs, the party was reaching its glittering crescendo.

Renata Mondragón stood near the grand marble fireplace of the main salon, holding a crystal flute of vintage Moët & Chandon, surrounded by half a dozen of Mexico City’s elite socialites. Dressed in a breathtaking crimson Versace gown that hugged her slender frame, she looked every bit the picture of aristocratic perfection.

“Darling, your husband’s absence must be killing you,” one of her friends teased, sipping her drink. “How does Alejandro manage to stay in Madrid for so long? Weren't you worried about him getting lonely?”

Renata smiled, taking a slow, elegant sip of her champagne. Her eyes sparkled with calculated amusement.

“Oh, Alejandro is entirely married to his work,” Renata replied smoothly, her voice carrying across the room. “Men like him don't need comfort at home. They need targets, contracts, and numbers to chase. As long as the accounts are well-funded, he barely notices what happens inside these four walls. Distance is a blessing in a marriage like ours.”

A ripple of polite, sophisticated laughter swept through the group of friends.

“And Valentina?” another woman asked. “Is she joining us tonight? She’s been so terribly anti-social lately.”

Renata’s smile tightened just a fraction, a flash of cold steel crossing her features. “Oh, Valentina is resting upstairs. She had a... minor behavioral episode this afternoon. Teenagers love to throw dramatic tantrums when they don't get their way. But discipline cures everything. A locked door and a stern reminder of who pays her tuition usually works wonders.”

Before anyone could respond, the heavy mahogany double doors of the main salon swung open with a resounding bang that echoed off the high ceilings.

The music scratched to a sudden halt. The conversation died instantly. All twenty heads turned toward the entrance.

Standing in the doorway was Alejandro Mondragón.

His overcoat was gone. His tie was loosened, hanging slightly askew. His shirt collar was unbuttoned, and his eyes were burning with a cold, terrifying intensity that made the room’s temperature drop ten degrees in a single second.

For a few seconds, nobody breathed.

Renata blinked rapidly, her glass of champagne trembling in her hand as if she were seeing a ghost step out of a nightmare.

“A-Alejandro?” Renata stammered, her voice losing its polished composure, a nervous tremor creeping into her tone. “You... you’re supposed to be in Madrid. Your secretary said—”

“My secretary says whatever my corporate schedule requires her to say, Renata,” Alejandro interrupted, his voice cutting through the silent room like a razor blade.

He walked slowly, deliberately into the center of the salon, his heavy leather shoes clicking against the marble floor. Every step he took forced the elegant guests to step backward, instinctively clearing a path for him.

Renata forced an uneasy, fragile laugh, trying to recover her footing in front of her friends. “Darling, what a wonderful surprise! Why didn't you let us know you were flying back tonight? We would have prepared a proper welcome, instead of—instead of this casual gathering—”

“Gathering?” Alejandro repeated, stopping just three feet away from her. His gaze swept across the room, taking in the expensive dresses, the half-empty glasses of champagne, and the glittering hypocrisy of the people standing before him.

Then he looked back at his wife.

“You call this a gathering,” Alejandro said softly, his voice dropping into a tone so cold it made Renata’s breath catch. “While upstairs, my daughter—your own flesh and blood—was sitting on the floor with packed suitcases, crying her eyes out because she was terrified of living another day under your roof.”

The room erupted into a flurry of shocked whispers.

“Alejandro, please,” Renata hissed, her face draining of color, her aristocratic mask cracking down the center. “Don't make a scene in front of our guests. Whatever the girl told you—she’s lying, she’s dramatic, she’s manipulating you—”

“She showed me her wrists, Renata,” Alejandro shouted, the full force of his fury finally breaking through his restraint.

The sound echoed off the crystal chandeliers, silencing every whisper in the room.

Renata stepped back, her heel catching the edge of the Persian rug, nearly losing her balance. “That’s... that’s an absurd exaggeration. She fell in the garden! She bruises easily!”

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“She showed me the letter,” Alejandro continued, stepping closer, towering over her with eyes full of unforgiving judgment. “The letter where you threatened to strip her of everything if she dared call me for help. The letter where you proved that this house wasn't a home, but a concentration camp run by a woman with an empty soul and a heart made of ice.”

Renata’s friends began backing toward the foyer, grabbing their designer purses and coats with frantic speed. No one wanted to be caught in the crossfire of a corporate titan whose family life had just violently imploded. Within two minutes, the salon was completely cleared of guests, leaving only Alejandro, Renata, and the heavy, suffocating silence of a marriage dying in real-time.

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