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Chapter 4 - The Prototype in the Lab

Three weeks later, the sterile, high-security R&D annex on the top floor of Bennett Medical’s corporate headquarters in Seattle was buzzing with suppressed nervous energy.

Through the double-paned observation glass, a dozen senior biomedical engineers in white lab coats stood watching the testing floor with the intense focus of rocket scientists monitoring a shuttle launch.

In the center of the room walked Annie Carter.

She wore a pair of athletic shorts and a lightweight gray t-shirt. Attached to her right side was the Series-9 neural-adaptive prosthetic system—a marvel of modern engineering that glowed with a faint, pulsing blue indicator light along the carbon-fiber shin guard.

Sitting at the primary console behind the glass, monitoring real-time telemetry data scrolling across three curved monitors, was Jonathan Bennett.

“Gait symmetry is holding at ninety-nine point four percent,” lead engineer Dr. Aris Thorne reported, adjusting his glasses in disbelief. “Neural feedback loop calibration is locking onto her nerve endings faster than our computer models predicted. It’s like the limb is learning her walking style in real-time.”

Jonathan didn't answer. He watched every step she took.

The clumsy, mechanical click of the old Model 4-A was gone. Replaced by absolute, fluid silence.

Annie walked across the pressure-sensor mats, pivoted sharply to the left, climbed a flight of simulated steel stairs, and then jogged back down toward the center of the testing arena.

When she finished the sequence, she didn't collapse or wince. She stopped, stood tall, and flashed a wide, radiant thumbs-up toward the observation window.

Behind the glass, Dr. Thorne let out a breath he didn't know he’d been holding. “Incredible. Simply incredible.”

Jonathan stood up from the console, adjusted his cuffs, and walked out of the observation booth into the testing area.

Annie was unstrapping her heart-rate monitor when he approached. Her face was flushed with exertion, but her eyes were shining brighter than he had ever seen them.

“Well, Miss Carter,” Jonathan said, hands tucked into his trousers. “Does the equipment meet your expectations?”

Annie grinned, taking a deep, steady breath. “To be honest, Mr. Bennett? It feels like cheating.”

“Good,” Jonathan replied. “In engineering, if you aren't cheating physics, you aren't trying hard enough.”

He handed her a fresh towel from the rack.

“By the way,” Jonathan added casually, “your mother’s transfer to the specialized care unit at Mercy General went through this morning. Her doctors called an hour ago to report that her kidney function has stabilized.”

Annie froze. The towel slipped slightly in her hands, and for the second time in her life, tears spilled over her lashes—not tears of frustration or pain, but of a massive, crushing weight finally lifting off her shoulders.

“Thank you,” she whispered, her voice cracking. “Thank you for everything, sir.”

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“Don't thank me yet,” Jonathan said, a playful smirk touching his lips. “Your quarterly performance review is coming up next month. And as your employer, I expect you to maintain a little thing I like to call exceeding expectations.”

Annie laughed, stepping forward and testing her new stride with absolute, unshakable confidence.

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